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                                             November 25, 2007

"Highland Hawk"
by Leslie Turner White.

      Your basic adventure novel, here,
      "historical" variety, with Cromwell
      and Cavendish strutting around             And also a Robert Lowry,
      on stage as secondary characters.          who I can't quite
                                                 place, though the name
      Readable enough, though                    sounds familiar...
      there are places where                     And for once, wikipedia
      the author is too                          is no help.  Perhaps
      obviously trying to open                   I'm thinking of someone
      negotions with Hollywood                   else, and he's not a
      (see, Erroll Flynn                         contemporary of the
      vehicle!  Get it?  And       I see that    parlimentary rebellion
      look, his side-kick is a     White did     of the 1640s.
      regular Friar Tuck,          the story
      right up Eugene              for Flynn's
      Pallette's alley!).          "Northern
                                   Pursuit"
      The plot manipulations       (1943)...
      are a little heavy-handed
      in places as well,              There are precious few web
      particularly the business       hits on "Leslie Turner White"
      about an escape from an         in this day and age... many
      inconvienient                   a page pushing used books,
      marriage-under-duress by        but no fan sites, no wikipedia
      the novel's end.                writeups...

        The real trouble
        is that White
        just isn't taking
        the project all
        that seriously
        and is happy to      The tip-off is the back
        let it degenerate    jacket photo: shot from
        into Camp.           below, posing with
                             nautical cap and pipe,
                             squinting at the sky.

                                   All page             My copy was once
                                   numbers here         owned by the
      " Yet, mark this,            are from the         Birmingham Public
        _m'lud_ -- ye'd best       hardcover            Library, and is
        muzzle yer tongue an'      edition from         labeled "cop. 4"
        confide naught to a        Crown, which         which might be
        wooman ye wouldn't         can not be           a gauge of the
        pass to the town           the first.           author's popularity.
        crier! " -- P. 104
                                     The dust             The card sitting
                                     jacket               in the envelope
                                     mentions             glued in the back
        "... By the way, sir,        "Lord                would not seem
      what *is* his exact            Johnnie"             to be the first:
      position in your service?"     which was
        "Marster o' Conscience!"     published               It shows only
      snorted Half-Hanged, "I        later in                three check-outs:
      keep the troublesome beast     1959.                     Nov  6 '57
      bridled an' out o' 'arm's                                Apr 17 '68
      w'y!"  -- p. 105                    It claims that       Nov  6 '68
                                          "Lord Johnnie"
                                          sold in the
                                          "multi-millions".
        " Have I not explained that       His one big hit?
      I am a student of human nature?"
        " The worst side of human                DOWN_WITH_ARISTOCRACY
      nature, it would seem!"
        "Bah! There is only one side!
      Man is like a magician; he
      talks about one thing while his
      hands do something else."
               -- p. 135


   The dialog in dialect
   grates in places, though        And to my ear the Scottish
   perhaps surprisingly few.       dialect in play in MacLeod's
                                   "Newton's Wake" is even less
                                   intrusive.  Maybe this is
                                   something that sometimes
                                   works, and sometimes cause
                                   problems?

                                      At a guess, it's just a matter
                                      of quantity.  If you've got
                                      too many sentences where the
                                      apostrophe's outnumber the
                                      consonants, readability crashes.





                                          P.113 refers to "the notorious
                                          cry of the London thieves --
                                          '_Rescue! Rescue!_' "



                                          On p.26, a footnote explains
                                          that "Doomster" is a professional
                                          Scottish executioner.


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