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                                              August    18, 2008
                                              September  3, 2008
                                              September 17, 2008


  On watching some Next Generation episodes
  (mostly from the second season, I think)...

      Structural problems between
      plot and premise: the
      enterprise is in deadly        Some mysterious
      danger, but they insist on     phenomena is eating
      alternating that with          the ship's brain, and
      domestic soap.                 then it's "Wesley,
                                     I'm worried about
                                     you.  You've been
                                     working so *haaard*
                                     lately."


      Some guesses:

      They're going for the *MASH*
      format of multiple interlayered
      stories -- but to get that to
      work, you need a conglomeration
      of minatures, and Star Trek
      (and Science Fiction in
      general) is about grand sweep.

      They were trying to soften
      stories based on intellectual      I understand that the
      abstractions by forcibly           show apparently did
      injecting "human interest".        remarkably well with
                                         female audiences.         FAULT
                                         Maybe they knew what
                                         they were doing?

   About Troi,
   the "empath":

   Given the stories
   they're interested in,    In a tense diplomatic
   Troi is Superman-- and    situation it is           Riker's skill at poker
   they neglected to         cruicial to estimate      not withstanding, it's
   supply a kryptonite       the sincerity of all      insane that you would
   fix.                      concerned.                not have Troi do
                                                       all negotiations...

                                                       Because she's female,
                            Spock through              she's not allowed to
                            the mirror.                be tough & manipulative?

                                 RULE_OF_REVERSALS       Instead, they
                                                         have her play
                               Though this is            Cathy Guisewite.
                               obscured by the
                               presence of a               (Both "generations",
                               "spock-type" on             despite their
                               stage.                      best intentions
                                                           were plagued
                                  But Data too is a        by sexism).
                                  reversal, but a
   They have to pretend           reflection around
   that she's not there,          another axis: the
   except when needed for         "logical being"
   quick plot resolutions.        that *wants* to be
                                  "human", rather
   Oh, how can we tell            than in denial of it.
   if this Romulan is
   lying?                                 A reassuring premise:
                                          it remains valuable to
       So much smarmy,                    to be human.
       touchy-feely
       dialog-- the                           In the 1960s Star Trek,
       incessant                              the point was to reassure
       sentimentality                         that "emotions" were still
       is the most                            valuable: man does not
       off-putting                            live by grim contemplation
       thing about the                        of strategy alone.
       series.
                                                   MAD: destroying humanity
                                                   in order to save it.

The premise of "Next
Generation" is the ultimate                        Human beings remain
triumph of romantic humanism.                      at the helm.  Human
                                                   beings-- funny ears,
     And also:                                     and lumpy foreheads
                                                   not-withstanding--
     Wisdom is possible,                           remain at the
     and can avert disaster.                       negotiation table.

                                                      The prescence of
In retrospect, that vision                            autonomy in a
of conflict resolution through                        machine necessitates
a diplomacy that is backed by                         a human face.
force, but that wisely
forebears using it... that                       (In reality, given the
all looks sadly, desperately                     technology and political
relevant.                                        situations of ST, actual
                                                 space battles would pass in
If they had done a better job                    an eye-blink, faster than the
with this show, could they                       long-feared nuclear spasm.)
have prevented the excesses
of the Naughts?

Could they have psychologically
prepared the United States
to deal with a 9/11 attack
without going insane?

If they'd been less smarmy
about it, could they have
gotten people to take it
more seriously?

Maybe they could've created a
bulwark against "Incredible        DAISY_CUTTER_DIPLOMACY
Hulk" foreign policy.
                                   HULK_JONES


         It's really *not*
         impossible for fiction to
         achieve that sort of          The Ferengi weren't a
         thing (e.g. "1984" was        bad try at satirizing
         pretty effective on           corporate values -- it's
         through 1984 or so).          too bad that they seemed
                                       so much like Shylock
                                       with funny ears.

                                                      MACROSS_PLUS






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