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THE_MIST

                                              June 23, 2006

 Being a writer was my goal in life,
 during my mid-teens. To the extent
 that I had any goals (outside of the
 obvious ones).
      
   Being an over-intellectualized    
   introvert, I was very interested        Thankfully, I was a
   in Kerouac's "spontaneous prose"        little too smart for
   ideas, and since I was frustrated       the alcohol trap.
   with blocked writing projects,    
   and a feeling that my life was    
   in a rut (at the age of 16),     
   I conceived of an experiment:    
   I would attempt to write a       
   mystery novel that took place        The working title
   in the framework of my life; I       for this "mystery
   would work fictional events          novel" project        And I haven't
   into what had happened to            became "The Mist".    lost any of
   me that day, and use the need                              my keen sense
   for story material drive me in                             of clever
   different directions in my                                 wordplay.
   actual life.                     
               
          A day dream written
          down in sequence,
   
               A device to break
               a set pattern of
               behavior.
   
   
   
      That particular
      experiment ran into          But was it really
      some problems, of            that silly a          "If I want to go
      course.                      scheme?  Maybe        around asking
                                   I needed to take      questions at
      I was a kid who was          it more seriously.    random, I'll need
      carefully keeping my                               a cover.  Maybe I
      head down in the                                   should start an
      long island suburban                               'underground'
      hell... there were                                 school newspaper."
      reasons for this.       And however easy          
                              it is to dismiss        
        The rut that I        it all as               
        was living in was     excessive shyness       
        only partially of     at this distance...    Those reasons    
        my own creation,                             weren't          
        much of it was                               necessarily 
        the usual school                             all that bad.   
        regimentation.        
                              
            What are the odds
            that I would
            suddenly find ways   And those reasons
            to deviate from      would be
            this for *secret*    incomprehensible
            reasons?             without lenghty
                                 explaination, and
                                 dismissed as
                                 irrational or
                                 insane once
                                 explained.



                 It was the beginning of
                 "social studies" class.
                 There had been a fight       I caught a glimpse
                 in the hall that people      of it on my way in
                 were still talking about.    the door: some
                                              pudgy, nerdy kids
                 Things had calmed down,      who weren't known as
                 and the bell had just        fighters were going
                 rung, but the teacher        at it, rolling
                 was still standing in        around on the
                 the doorway.  He             floor.
                 mentioned that there was
                 actually blood on the                   Red-faced.
                 floor.                                  Clumsy.


                 I stood up out of my seat,
                 walked across the room and
                 shouldered past him
                 momentarily to look down
                 the hall.  He looked               There was indeed,
                 momentarily stunned -- I           a tiny little
                 was technically breaking           puddle of blood,
                 the rules, and I wasn't            bright red against
                 someone he'd expect to             the drab greenish
                 push it.                           speckled tiles.

                 Then, as I returned to my            The buckets of
                 seat, he commented, with             blood disappeared
                 his usual cynical sarcasm,           from my murder
                 "Yes, the sight of blood             scene.  That
                 usually does bring out the           understated puddle
                 crowds."                             was so much better.
                                                                        
                 I smiled weakly and sat down,           (But despite scenes 
                 while the other kids were no            of violence like    
                 doubt wondering about my                this, I still had    
                 behavior -- I described briefly         trouble believing    
                 what I'd seen to the guy next           in motives strong   
                 to me.                                  enough for high      
                                                         school murders.)   
                     (And retroactively
                     converted any curiosity
                     about me into curiosity
                     about the blood.)


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